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Thursday, November 14, 2019

The scary storm

                                           

WALT:We are learning to use descriptive vocab in our writing.

BOOM!I shot up in fear as  loud thunder rattles my bedroom.When the lighting strikes my room lights up so bright I thought I would go blind. God must of been moving a  
house by the sound of the thunder early this morning.


Were you scared when you heard thunder and if you were how did you feel?

It was hard doing my google draw because i didn't know what i was going for.

2 comments:

  1. great story bobby you are a good writer

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  2. Wow Bobby that is so specific. There are a few errors but that was fantastic.

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